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Sleepovers

Don't be weak,
please don't weep when I leave,
for when I fall asleep
you can follow me to my dreams.
you can either change this place
or just erase this place
for this amazing space,
is our canvas to paint.
follow me into my dream
it's there we can be
left together so soundly,
stay and sleep here with me.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:57:00 PM

    I love the last line. This paints a great picture in my mind. Nicely penned! :)

    Farley IV Avatar Patrick Farley IV Date: 11/14/2012 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! I'm glad it painted a picture.