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Thoughts of you

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Thoughts of you

You occupy my mind
two souls now intertwine
connections undefined

A once weary existence
altered through persistence

Written in the stars
through all time and space
you occupy my mind
in this hidden place

Destiny attained
through mystic fires of flame

Fires burn deep
you occupy my mind
even in my sleep

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 4:27:00 PM
    I know what you mean...the kicker to all this heartache that makes us feel alive. Is they don't see the beauty with in us and how they inspire and bring out the beutiful qualities in us to be able to write things about them so poetically. will they ever know? keep writing and sharing! kim*

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    Date: 10/31/2012 11:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Those undeserving may never know but one day, the right person will. I can no longer occupy my time with people who are undeserving. I might be losing the opportunity of finding my true destiny.
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 1:54:00 AM
    very touching,, heartfelt write...thanks for sharing Deeana...enjoyed!!! SK <3<3