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Burning On

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Burning On

My ache licks like a furnace, Silent Spark
For you have further prolonged my patience;
Building on the weak to perturb the dark, 
To surrender selfish sense of silence;
Your silence, an incision to the heart, 
Angers that which disappears out of sight,
That mocks life, to its desolate ill part;
Cowers me out, so far-sight may ignite.
Bright am I now, lost into void and woe,
A panic fire orb which hath poured;
My speech and my prudence still lacketh flow,
Blackened from all heat sorely abhorred
Oh, I do light thee well as I may try
For you I burn on, till the day I die

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 1:30:00 AM
    when love is gone an empitness prevails, esteem is low swings low me bloody sai, track down another horse or lover, an you'll be fine as long as it aint ya brudder...

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 9:27:00 AM
    Yo Dude, as Randy Jackson would say--Shakespeare Lives!!

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 1:22:00 PM
    Hating love is so fun, loving the hate of love, being a captive of love generates that hateful, hot love - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:58:00 PM
    :D that is all --Becca

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    Date: 10/29/2012 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    O_O Thank you for the gracious grin. c: ~Laura