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Love's Exposition

wherein lies beauty
         held captive by eyes forlorn  
heart thirsts ... reflective
breach misty wall of silence
   unveils passion desiring
          joyous warmth of love disperse

~*~

10/28/12 
For Su's Tanka Contest


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  1. Date: 11/3/2012 6:47:00 AM

    A lovely Tanka here by you Annalise!Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 3:00:00 PM

    how lovely to find this one of yours today. I enjoy tankas and this is a great message!

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 8:15:00 AM

    ‡ Oh And I Love Depth In Heart I Find; Sooo Beautiful. Have A Glorious Day, Sweet Beautiful Annalise. Kisses To You, Rachel *

    Brigham Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 10/31/2012 1:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm wishing you the same, dear and take care of yourself, hear? Love ya!
  1. Date: 10/31/2012 8:09:00 AM

    ‡ I May As Well Let Your Beauty Know Now That This Storm Brewing Beauty, Is Marked In The Most Treasured Of Beautiful Favourites, Sweet Beautiful Annalise. Intense These Flames In Red Passion Twined This Love; Completely Captivating. Happy Holloween To You And Thank You For Your Beauty's Kind Visit. My Love, Rachel *

    Brigham Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 10/31/2012 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    : ) Always good to know that you're around, Rachel...Thanks for the glowing comment. Bless you for your kind support and love always.. xxoo to you!
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 6:44:00 AM

    wow, Annalise, this is wonderful, a true love poem, good luck in contest...

    Brigham Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 10/30/2012 6:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry...Hope you doing well.
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 4:11:00 PM

    Lot of feelings in a love poem, beautiful Annalise. Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Brigham Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 10/30/2012 6:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise...hope you're doing well. Love, Me
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 10/29/2012 4:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ps. Luck in contest !!!!!! :)