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A Woman's Poem

He didn't like the casserole
and he didn't like my cake.
He said my bisquits were too hard
and not like his mother used to make.
I didn't perk the coffee right
and he didn't like the stew.
I didn't mend his socks
the way his mother used to do.
I pondered for an answer.
I was looking for a clue,
and then I turned around and smacked the hell out of him
just like his mother used to do.

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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 5:03:00 PM

    sent this one right to my daughter; if the shoe fits, throw it.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:18:00 AM

    great ending! this gave me a good chuckle...

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 5:00:00 PM

    LOVE IT! I think all women in a relationship feels like that from time to time.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 4:57:00 PM

    hahaha, well what did he expect, he deserved it, enjoyed reading your poem, love elizabeth