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  1. Date: 12/6/2012 4:27:00 PM
    I have moved a lot during my life and there is an odd excitement and trepidation that accompanies the move. Well written piece John. Makes me want to stay put for a while longer.To many carefuly wrapped things I am not ready to discard.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 8:46:00 AM
    Not only moving non resting too, goes on and on asking again and again till got. Well done, my friend. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:13:00 AM
    Thanks for the welcome and the comment on my poem. I really enjoyed this one - all too true, especially as I'm in the process of moving right now.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:23:00 PM
    If the move goes as smooth as the poetry, it should be a breeze. Your way with words and the story you weave makes me glad I'm not the one doing it! :) Don't stub your toe wandering around with all that stuff. Great visions of the horrible John, you done good my friend. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 10:49:00 PM
    Ha,ha..Nice write! So your moving once again hey? I hope you find your greener pastures. :o)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:47:00 AM
    I am having so much fun reading your perfect meter and rhyme and would read more now but I haven't got time. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 5:40:00 PM
    Great poem. This time I'm in a temporary move and left with only 1 suit case and a smile. Went from St. Louis, Mo. to Phoenix, Arizona to stay with my ailing Dad. I'll be back when ever I can for a while.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 8:53:00 PM
    Lol, funny, John. I guess you are the one who has to lift those boxes. Don't blame you. But just think you are moving to a new place, new environment, new decorations (you have to do it of course). Something to look forward to, right? Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 2:04:00 PM
    very nice! you've captured everything about moving so well in this clever poem!

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 1:17:00 PM
    Absolutely loved this very timely tirade! Just so happens our house is on the market so some time in the not too distant future, we'll hopefully be singing that "movin' on" song!