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That night, knowing she loves butterflies;
He promised her a visit in fairy disguise,
In doubt that he might, she bought,
Knowing he adores, a sample boat;
Yet she never believed in his fairytale
In the morning, she caught a rare butterfly, 
And pinned it onto the white plastic sail,
Then she began to cry, annoyed by his lie.

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  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:11:00 PM
    Jamal, there is a reaction for every action.....Thank you for this abc poem :-) I enjoyed what I read, always~PD

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 12:36:00 PM
    ... and I admire your touching poem Jamal - well written. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 10/29/2012 3:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Anne for your most encouraging words.