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Freedom From Winter Breeze

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Freedom From Winter Breeze

                 my skin
       requests for warmth
             to resist cold,
freedom from winter breeze,
  sweeping many into grave
             before time.

                my heart
       pounds for my love
         as charcoal burns,
    keeping us close as one,
hands seek contours of her back
              to be sure.



Olusegun Arowolo  ;DATE:10-28-2012

CONTEST:"Views From a Vignette" sponsored by Nette Onclaud.

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:58:00 PM
    wow, that last part was outstanding, Olusequn. Congrats on your great win.

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:51:00 PM
    THANKXX FOR YOUR OBSERVANT EYE OLUSEGUN MY FRIEND ..NO ONE NOTICED BUT U LUV AND I SO APPRECIATE U LETTING ME KNOW BOUT TYPO .. U R A DEAR ..

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 10:57:00 AM
    Olusegun, CONGRATULATIONS, in Nette's "VIEWS FROM A VIGNETTE" contest.. Keep up the good work... always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:25:00 PM
    From the title to the very last line--sheer elegance of thot! I will just take this as a hint that all is well with u, friend...congrats on this wonderful poem! gwendolen :)

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 9:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on your first place win. Excellent!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:50:00 PM
    SUPER CONGRATS OLUSEGUN ON A FIRST PLACE WIN FOR A REMARKABLE WRITE LUV..

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Congrats on your win with this dynamic vignette. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 11:54:00 AM
    Creative winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 10:01:00 AM
    This is an awesome write Olusegun!Congrats on your top win!

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:59:00 AM
    Another superb win Olly, congratulations xx

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:53:00 AM
    Ahhhh so proud of one of my favorite students winning high honors!!The heat of passion! Just lovely. Congrad's on your write winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 7:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the Vignette contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 6:52:00 AM
    Beautiful well deserved first Olusequn!

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:06:00 PM
    Enjoyed your vignettes Olu, I love the end lines hands seek contours of her back to be sure A comforting presence? xxxx vie

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 5:53:00 AM
    LOVELY --- Olusegun ---- Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) <3