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Spiritual Moment

“My Mystic Moment*with you”

A natural look of who I am on the inside.
A reality check of who you are on the outside.

A mirror facing west makes the difference in you and me.
Open your eyes and see.

The child I was today is the reflection of you tomorrow.
The ideas of different skies, drifted off without sorrow.

I am the good the bad, and the ugly…
A song permitting retrospection to delay the same face with yesterday’s glee.

From moon, to admirable moon;
The dignity of holding the same tune.

I am the swan that swims through your veins.
You are what swim’s through my moods and rain.

The miracle of our heritage, echoed so far away. 
Auspices now imitate metaphors that were under the surface bay.

An unknown look strays outside the window.
Behind the gates, that leads into tomorrow’s limbo.’

A mirage of turning around and seeing nobody but you and me.
Mystic moments that attract other moments of originality.

A dream that speaks about the image of my new beginning.
My courage polishes off the mirror image of a falling stars ending 
You are the beating pulse that resides on the inside and outside of my being. 

“You are the REFLECTION of my spiritual place”





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  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:25:00 PM

    7up!!!!

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:23:00 PM

    Nice I liked it a lot awesome poem pd

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 7:16:00 AM

    tht''s turning to be a swan swiming in my viens.....tht''s the perfct reflctn one could cast being spritual.............. ...thnkeu for ua wishes

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 4:05:00 PM

    Don't worry about it sis. You have to stick up for yourself or people will walk all over you. I have a warriors spirit also, so I do understand and respect you wholeheartedly! I think I know who you're talking about. The Soup knows you're a kind and supportive poet; keep being you! The Scribe

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 1:30:00 PM

    very special not just your words but your knowledge of the heartbeat kevin

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:23:00 AM

    PD, enjoyed the multifacet you in this lovely poem.

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 4:28:00 PM

    Very well expressed and written. A very mystic moment for all those who read this poem. Great job. Your friend Lynn

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:16:00 AM

    visit your spiritual place today and cleanse the soul.have a great day.

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 8:34:00 PM

    If only we could all see such reflections, this demands intense slowness at reading and that's an art in itself which only adds to the haunting of this work. I'm going to have to stop reading yours Dark One, am getting fed up of all this praise lol. Take care, Regards Richard. ok, I'll be back

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Wow, Poet Destroyer... I am blown away by this one! There is so much food for thought that it makes me wish I was there with you, while you were experiencing this great moment of clarity. So many live and die not ever really knowing who they are or what they really want... so what an indescribable feeling it must be to walk with confidence knowing you're perhaps not on the most leisurely path, but the RIGHT one that was meant for YOU. This is probably my favorite from you so far, keep writing!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:20:00 AM

    'I am the swan that swims through your veins' whose vein are you swimming through? Great One there

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 8:09:00 PM

    Ok I haven't read a poem I don't like yet. I feel lke many issues are being mirrored as I read. I always try to stay very objective in my comments, but I'm becoming slightly biased as I read.

  1. Date: 1/22/2013 9:48:00 PM

    I'm the same way when pushed. People may think I'm mean, when I'm totally the opposite. I believe there's a thin line in respect, like the one in love. I believe it's thinner than love and hates!

    ML Avatar SCRIBE ML Date: 1/22/2013 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I missed your blog. They took it down?
  1. Date: 1/17/2013 8:45:00 AM

    I rarely have the time to read poems when I come on PoetrySoup but just to post a poem I may have written a few minutes before going on. But I must say I guess it was the morning for me to read a few and I am happy to have taken a few minutes and read through some of your poems because your poems are thought provoking and beautiful. I hope in 2013 I will have more time to read your poems and many others.. Have a Great Day! Simmplissity

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 3:41:00 AM

    Beautifully written.. amazing words.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:28:00 AM

    HAPPY NEW LINDA AKA PD.I APPRECITE YOUR COMMENTS.YOU CAN CONTACT ME OUTSIDE POETRYSOUP,IF YOU LIKE. Email:manotafrika@gmail.com

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 3:47:00 AM

    IN SINCERERITY, I LOVE AND LEARN FROM THIS. ITS ALWAYS GOOD WORK

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 6:44:00 PM

    I really like this one...It brought me peace. :o)

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:01:00 PM

    Linda; This is beautiful and very original. You are the reflection of my spiritual place. I like that. We should all have a spiritual moment with ourselves and the other person. thanks for sharing and for reading My Birthday. Lucy

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:43:00 PM

    wow, this was nice :) & really different. poems like these help us to see the spirit behind a poet. and yeah you're right.. infatuation just leads you up to no good, i've learned that...that's why i perfer friendships that go on for years instead of months..i'd rather have that than an actual relationship..especially with my age group.xD because then you can really find out about each other. :p i know how to behave! Lol & Nathan sounds like a nice man(: who was he? ~Always&Forever Lynn

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:40:00 AM

    beautiful writing

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:12:00 PM

    Def one of my favorites! I love your vocab. I wish I had it! -Mike

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:53:00 PM

    im now in chatroom and typed hello and messages but can't be connected or send... wait please.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:47:00 PM

    Hi my sisie-pooh! Please wait. I'm now entering the chatroom but it's too slow. Down load music appeared. Why? please wait because I am using an aircard. I am coming please..Thank you so much.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 11:59:00 PM

    a beautiful written very nice one i like this one .. and thanks for your appriciation on my win .. :)

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:12:00 PM

    Most enchanting poem -analysing self in the context of love. I admire your talent. About your comments on my Tanka Foundation, PD you are not complicated at all. May be my Tanka is. Just think about what the shoot is meaning to say. Couds may look huge but are taken by winds and not allowed to stay in one place. On the contrary shoots can stay and grow to be a big tree in one place because they have roots in the ground. Regards -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 10:18:00 AM

    great PD... really impressive. sounds like a riddle. You mirror my consciousness. Bravo... Love

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 8:34:00 AM

    Nice mirroring self poem Poet Destroyer, so calm and nothing blasted or burnt except that mystique moon, I like the couplets and end.

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:46:00 AM

    It's nice to read this poem once again my dear sisie-pooh before finally logging out. I can't not stay long tonight because I've to finish first my exam b4 going to bed. I want to thank you again for sharing your great poems, your precious time to visit me today and your very inspiring comments on my latest poems. You brighten up my day! Wish you all the best always! God bless you and your family. Good night! love always, Leo

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 10:34:00 PM

    yes i like the flow, and rhyme as on it goes, reflected on our times, improving self and judging woe, but innocent sweet sublime, compared with some i know, where tragic is the crime...

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