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Spiritual Moment

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Spiritual Moment

“My Mystic Moment*with you”

A natural look of who I am on the inside.
A reality check of who you are on the outside.

A mirror facing west makes the difference in you and me.
Open your eyes and see.

The child I was today is the reflection of you tomorrow.
The ideas of different skies, drifted off without sorrow.

I am the good the bad, and the ugly…
A song permitting retrospection to delay the same face with yesterday’s glee.

From moon, to admirable moon;
The dignity of holding the same tune.

I am the swan that swims through your veins.
You are what swim’s through my moods and rain.

The miracle of our heritage, echoed so far away. 
Auspices now imitate metaphors that were under the surface bay.

An unknown look strays outside the window.
Behind the gates, that leads into tomorrow’s limbo.’

A mirage of turning around and seeing nobody but you and me.
Mystic moments that attract other moments of originality.

A dream that speaks about the image of my new beginning.
My courage polishes off the mirror image of a falling stars ending 
You are the beating pulse that resides on the inside and outside of my being. 

“You are the REFLECTION of my spiritual place”




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  1. Date: 1/26/2014 12:47:00 AM

    Wow, you are awesome!!! Jamie

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 5:15:00 AM

    PD, you know I'm a rhymer so this one really resonated with me. Beautiful verses, thoughts and sentiments expressed throughout the poem. Wonderful work; kudos :)

  1. Date: 11/15/2013 5:07:00 PM

    This is an amazing inspirational poem, Linda! You described your feelings so beautifully here. Excellent writing, my friend!...Thank you so much for your recent comments. They are very encouraging to me!...soupmail coming...:)

  1. Date: 11/9/2013 1:57:00 AM

    Hi, my dearest sis & bff! I saw u on line..still there? Big hugs! I'm in schl now (short break) & i'm using the office computer so I peeking here. I was here last night & posted a short poem supposedly for a contest then I left early 'cuz of a weak signal. I hope you'll read it when u've time. How are u? Hope you're doing fine. Talk to u again soon! This very lovely & outstanding heartfelt poem of yours is always loved & enjoyed by me! More hugs! TYSM again !tcare! lovem4evr,Leo

  1. Date: 10/20/2013 8:10:00 AM

    Mysteriously crafted..well done

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 6:36:00 PM

    This poem is very very thought provoking and deep. Makes the reader think about each line. Great job

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 1:13:00 AM

    Nice one I love it.

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 7:07:00 AM

    You touch upon many ideas and subjects I have explored in my own work, so I really responded to this piece. Great read for me; Kudos to you! :)

  1. Date: 8/14/2013 7:56:00 PM

    Amazing ! I am blown away by your awesome talent dear Linda. Have a superb evening :)

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 3:30:00 PM

    Hello! Linda - Your rhyming poem is deep in meaning and a pleasure to read - You change thoughts through-out it's entirety, I wonder how you stay focus all to that wonderful last three lines; You pull from within your soul, for everyone with eyes to see. Thank you for this post. Perry Campanella.

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 10:09:00 AM

    Rereading once again this stupendous write of yours my dearest sis before I finally log off & go to bed. I love this so much as always & hugging you tight with this stellar write. Again, thank you so much for sharing. Good night and God bless you and your love ones. More big & sweetest hugs from me to you my ever dearest sis. Missing you a lot, Leonora

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 10:04:00 AM

    Hi, my dearest sis! Thanks a lot for the sweet hi! Big big sweetest hugs to you w/ kisses too! Just peeking here for a while 'cuz I'm using my boss' notebook. I left mine at home. We're here in the province of bkk having a spiritual retreat since this a.m. It's a school requirement/act, We're going back home on Sun. pm. You're also busy like me ;). It's hot there,I think, better open it on a colder hrs.;) Here, super humid as well. I'll text you when I go back home ok? Tcare! love u m4evr, Leo

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 4:52:00 PM

    Hi Linda this poem is ausome I have struggled many times in my life contemplating the duallity between inner and outer self, it's difficult sometimes as the world is so very much a visual and judgmental one, I think this poem excellently identifies thatnks have a great day.....bryan k

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 2:44:00 PM

    Hi Linda, just returning the smile, hope your well

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:20:00 PM

    a deep and beautiful write Linda....I like the swan line...hugs

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:25:00 PM

    7up!!!!

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:23:00 PM

    Nice I liked it a lot awesome poem pd

  1. Date: 5/2/2013 7:16:00 AM

    tht''s turning to be a swan swiming in my viens.....tht''s the perfct reflctn one could cast being spritual.............. ...thnkeu for ua wishes

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 1:30:00 PM

    very special not just your words but your knowledge of the heartbeat kevin

  1. Date: 4/30/2013 11:23:00 AM

    PD, enjoyed the multifacet you in this lovely poem.

  1. Date: 4/28/2013 4:28:00 PM

    Very well expressed and written. A very mystic moment for all those who read this poem. Great job. Your friend Lynn

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:16:00 AM

    visit your spiritual place today and cleanse the soul.have a great day.

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 8:34:00 PM

    If only we could all see such reflections, this demands intense slowness at reading and that's an art in itself which only adds to the haunting of this work. I'm going to have to stop reading yours Dark One, am getting fed up of all this praise lol. Take care, Regards Richard. ok, I'll be back

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:44:00 AM

    Wow, Poet Destroyer... I am blown away by this one! There is so much food for thought that it makes me wish I was there with you, while you were experiencing this great moment of clarity. So many live and die not ever really knowing who they are or what they really want... so what an indescribable feeling it must be to walk with confidence knowing you're perhaps not on the most leisurely path, but the RIGHT one that was meant for YOU. This is probably my favorite from you so far, keep writing!

  1. Date: 1/26/2013 5:20:00 AM

    'I am the swan that swims through your veins' whose vein are you swimming through? Great One there

  1. Date: 1/23/2013 8:09:00 PM

    Ok I haven't read a poem I don't like yet. I feel lke many issues are being mirrored as I read. I always try to stay very objective in my comments, but I'm becoming slightly biased as I read.

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 8:45:00 AM

    I rarely have the time to read poems when I come on PoetrySoup but just to post a poem I may have written a few minutes before going on. But I must say I guess it was the morning for me to read a few and I am happy to have taken a few minutes and read through some of your poems because your poems are thought provoking and beautiful. I hope in 2013 I will have more time to read your poems and many others.. Have a Great Day! Simmplissity

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 3:41:00 AM

    Beautifully written.. amazing words.

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 3:28:00 AM

    HAPPY NEW LINDA AKA PD.I APPRECITE YOUR COMMENTS.YOU CAN CONTACT ME OUTSIDE POETRYSOUP,IF YOU LIKE. Email:manotafrika@gmail.com

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 3:47:00 AM

    IN SINCERERITY, I LOVE AND LEARN FROM THIS. ITS ALWAYS GOOD WORK

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