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The leaf

The  leaf

I am no breeze
To be of use in your summer
Wish I could  at least be a leaf
For you to 
Fan yourself with.


27/oct/12
Form: Gogyoka
FOR:  Debbie's' ANY FIVE LINES' CONTEST

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:04:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Jag. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 6:36:00 PM

    Jag.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:29:00 PM

    I love this one and also did the first time I saw it. congrats on the win of your marvelous little poem

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:29:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your winning place, I just love this one Jag xx

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 12:21:00 AM

    Loved tnis Jag.....Seren

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:20:00 PM

    Very subtle write!! I really enjoyed it. PLease do write for my new 6 line contest on LIGHT Congrad's on your skillfull win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 2:40:00 AM

    this is beautiful..........

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 10:40:00 AM

    quite romantic ;) Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 8:36:00 AM

    Ahh!!Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:09:00 AM

    sweet, lovely, tender, gentle

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 10:28:00 PM

    i find this so deep and gentle, jag... ohhhh!..;)hugggs!

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 8:40:00 AM

    this is so sweet. An awesome little verse.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 7:14:00 AM

    Such A perfect write.. very enjoyed Michael

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 6:56:00 AM

    hi jag very clever verse I like , all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 6:54:00 AM

    So gorgeous posted, jag. - thank you. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / huggs .... Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 12:47:00 AM

    Ah....just the little things in life make one happy....to be fan and offer someone special a delicate breeze...u are on a roll again! :) gwendolen

    R. Avatar Gwendolen R. Date: 10/28/2012 12:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    to be A fan...
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 7:52:00 PM

    Hello, Jab.... aweee.i love this image of you offering such a great image and breeze... xox....pd

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 7:24:00 PM

    Beautiful poem! Well done :)