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Repair the Tear

Repair the Tear

Ripped and torn apart
Wishing we could just restart
Where are you, comforter?
Will you only watch as everything falls apart?

Repair the tear

Pick up the shattered dreams
Drown out the splintered screams
Where are you, comforter?
Nothing is ever as it seems

Repair the tear

Drown them in sorrow
There will be no tomorrow
Where are you comforter?
Spread your sorrow

Repair the tear

What have you done?
Why are we only one
Where are you, comforter?
Everything is coming undone

Repair the tear
Repair the tear

There is no resolve
They all just self-revolve
Where are comforter?
they dissolve

Repair the tear

There is no repair
Ripping open the tear
There is no comforter
Falling into despair

Tear the repair

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  1. Date: 10/29/2012 9:20:00 PM

    I agree with the comments down below but I must also add-- AWESOMTASTICAL-COOLBEANERIFICAL amazingness. And. . . . yes, I'm done. :J Always, Laura

    Larkin Avatar Rebecca Larkin Date: 11/1/2012 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hehehe thanks Curly-frIIIIeeezzz :D hehe
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 4:13:00 PM

    One truly touching poem Rebecca, you write very well. Have a nice weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Larkin Avatar Rebecca Larkin Date: 11/1/2012 9:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you! :)
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 3:06:00 PM

    "There is no resolve They all just self-revolve sometimes in the course of a poem you strike the essence that youre looking for. So good Rebecca

    Larkin Avatar Rebecca Larkin Date: 11/1/2012 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much Justin! :D