The Leaving Bride by Isaiah Zerbst


Heather Ober Date: 4/29/2013 9:22:00 AM I hadn't seen this one of yours before! You have done a great job of delivering a punch of emotion with this nonet. The sense of loss is so evident, especially with that very effective ending.
Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/30/2013 4:46:00 PM Isaiah, this endures a good flowing verse, enjoyed your poem. Many Blessings with your Featured Poem of the week. By the way no matter my blue color or tune I am always here, spreading the colorful cheer.....Happy Easter!" xox~ LINDA
Aijaz Mahesar Date: 3/25/2013 12:16:00 PM Painful!
Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 3/25/2013 10:38:00 AM Congrats on your featured nonet.
Donna Jones Date: 3/24/2013 7:36:00 PM Beautiful Isaiah...but sad...congrats on the featured spot..donna
Annalise Brigham Date: 2/28/2013 7:48:00 PM This is sad but beautiful, still, Isaiah! Congratulations on a very fine win! Always, Annalise
RALPH TAYLOR Date: 2/28/2013 2:54:00 PM Excellent. Isaiah. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
Connie Gildersleeve Date: 2/28/2013 12:34:00 PM Congrats on your win. Connie
craig cornish Date: 2/28/2013 9:59:00 AM Like Dustin Hoffman? Hopefully fiction--too painful! Great write
Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/27/2013 9:59:00 PM a nice winning poem~PD
Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/15/2013 11:29:00 PM I really like this one. Reminds me of the movie scenes where the poor guy has to watch his true love marry another!! Great title for this one too. have you tried etheree? They are one line longer than nonet and one of my favorite forms to write in.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/15/2013 11:28:00 PM My beau is neither rich nor poor, he is simply imaginary. haha. NOw let me see this poem of yours.
Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/2/2013 2:02:00 PM Hope this is fictional.I love happy poems but sad poems at times can feel more real.Somehow more beautiful too.Yep so sad but Oh so beautifully penned- Charma
HOLLY MOORE Date: 10/30/2012 6:32:00 PM This is sad...I hope whoever this is about got passed it. Obviously, there is someone much more special out there. Your Nonet inspired me to write one. Check it out if you have time....Holly Moore
Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/27/2012 9:17:00 PM isaiah, enjoyed your nonet poem Goodnight! Always~ PD*

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The Leaving Bride

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