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Water Spirit

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Written after reading Irfana Ali Bhat's Poem "Reflection" I hope she enjoys this poem.



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Water Spirit

Her spirit is water
I let it soak in
Her words permeate
My soul starts to sing

Where has she come from
With softness and power
Creating new life
Rivers and showers

The banks can't hold her
She'll go where she goes
A creature of beauty
Magical as she flows

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  1. Date: 6/30/2014 9:57:00 AM
    This a beautiful, I am astrologically ruled by water and respect the power the water spirit has :) great poem :)

  1. Date: 3/13/2014 6:20:00 PM
    Hi Richard, How well you display your writes before us. "The Water Spirit", one can almost feel the water as a living presence. You inject such life and power into this magical write. I read, close my eyes and I see a myriad of magical water effects. This one really fires up my imagination Richard. May the waters ever flow and may your pen always stay golden. Have a good day. Catch you later. Yoiur Friend always....MIKE.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/13/2014 6:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    If you have a chance check out my Humpty Dumpty House poem. I think you might like it.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/13/2014 6:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your comment makes my day Michael. Thanks my friend.
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 12:55:00 AM
    A very nice flow here... Gosh I love that last line! It really struck me..

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 3/13/2014 6:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Dan, sorry it has taken me so long to read and respond to your comment.
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 11:09:00 AM
    this is amazing.....Glad my words could inspire someone...this is an Eid gift for me...thankyou... celebrating Eid(a muslim festival) today ...:))))

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/28/2012 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It is so sad that we share so much and it seems that some people need to focus on the differences. We are praying to the same God, he must be so dissapointed in us.
    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/28/2012 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes,Richard ,it is same....we muslims believe in all prophets Moses,Jesus,David ,Jacob,Jonah ,Noah etc(Peace be upon them all)..the stories in Bible and Quran are mostly same with some miniature differences...
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/27/2012 3:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Is this the same as in the old Testiment when God asked Abraham to Sacrifice his Son and he provided a Ram after stopping Abraham from carrying out his instructions?
    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    both the Eid's r celebrated with fervor and fest...ppl visit each other and exchange Eid greetings...new clothes,elaborate meals and exchanging gifts complete the essence....hope u got the idea now...:))
    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    we celebrate two Eid's in a year...one is celebrated after fasting for one month from dawn to dusk... another is celebrated in commemoration of Abrahim's sacrifice of his son..on this day we sacrifice an animal and give it to poor and needy
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/27/2012 11:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have heard of the Ides of march but never Eid, what does it represent in your faith???
    Ali Bhat Avatar Irfana Ali Bhat
    Date: 10/27/2012 11:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/27/2012 11:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Happy Eid.
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:31:00 AM
    27/10/2012 - 18:26 here in Antananarivo, Madagascar, Indian Ocean Island, next to Mauritius and La Réunion and The Comoros... I am happy here to be the first to view and comment and rate your poem: as pleasant and interesting as the others I just visited... I'll come back as often as possible: love your write!:) Hanitra

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 10/27/2012 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks I quickly typed a few lines so I would not forget my general thought. Have another look now that I am finished. Appreciate the visit.