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I Wonder Why

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I Wonder Why

Why does a man break his back in labor?
in exchange for a short pleasure
Or run the dough to eat?
Why does he fetch water
and waste it on barren ground?
why does he swallow loads of fat
then suffer the pain or ill?I wonder why, i wonder, why?

has his brain been plugged
by senselessness?
i wonder why.

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  1. Date: 1/28/2014 3:26:00 PM
    MARIGRACE, CONGRAT, in the any poem goes contest. Have yourself a nice sunny day....... SKAT

    Carretero Avatar Marigrace Carretero
    Date: 1/29/2014 10:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much
  1. Date: 1/5/2014 3:11:00 AM
    Very interesting and unique write, congrats on the win,

  1. Date: 1/3/2014 10:06:00 PM
    Marigrace, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest and I. have yourself an awesome 2014.. Always~ LINDA"

    Carretero Avatar Marigrace Carretero
    Date: 1/29/2014 10:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:06:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Marigrace. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Carretero Avatar Marigrace Carretero
    Date: 11/18/2012 1:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Carol.
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 7:35:00 PM
    Nice poem. Welcome to poetry soup! :)

    Carretero Avatar Marigrace Carretero
    Date: 11/18/2012 1:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much.
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 3:21:00 AM
    Interesting questions Marigrace and a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

    Carretero Avatar Marigrace Carretero
    Date: 11/18/2012 1:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.