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DAY DREAMER

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DAY DREAMER

Eyes wide open, facing a turbulent world. 
A few panting breathes inward, 
followed by a blink or two, 
leading to breaking news, 
stunned,and numb; 
non-believing, 
all the while, 
awake, 

DREAMING.

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:02:00 PM
    I like how this progressed, I felt like I am in this strange place going down stairs and not knowing what I am gonna find until I discovered that it was just a dream and some one woke me up! Love it, Omneya

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:00:00 PM
    Perfectly worded. The presentation is immaculate! Good write!

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    Date: 10/26/2012 6:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your compliments!!!!!!