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Autumn Air

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Autumn Air

You see your breath
In the Autumn air.
frozen, your sitting in dispair.
Deep, Deep,
Sinking into the dark.
You close your eyes.
Your at peace now.
You open your eyes 
to a changed world around you.


Mckenzie Argall
Autumn Air
10/26/12

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:17:00 PM
    Mckenzie, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 3:03:00 PM
    Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I like the contrast in the few lines..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 6:16:00 AM
    Congratulations on your awesome poetry being featured this week Mckenzie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:34:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Mckenzie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 3:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Mckenzie xx

    Argall Avatar Mckenzie Argall
    Date: 11/4/2012 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 9:54:00 PM
    Unique one in the contest! ME LIKES> and congrats on your win.

    Argall Avatar Mckenzie Argall
    Date: 11/4/2012 12:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    haha! Thanks!
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:46:00 PM
    Congratulaitons Mckenzie. Love, Joyce

    Argall Avatar Mckenzie Argall
    Date: 11/4/2012 12:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:51:00 PM
    nice description of showing the change in seasons.