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rescued

he opened the drapes to my soul
and gently stepped into my life
dusting my lonliness away
bright shining light into my day
removing cobwebs here and there
slowly mopping my fears to nought
painting a smile upon my face
so calm and clear my heart in cheer

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 12:19:00 PM

    A nice poem Treisha - I like it :) Have a enjoyable weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 10:26:00 AM

    Very nice use of metaphors Treisha, i liked this , so simple yet so revealing

    williams Avatar treisha williams Date: 10/26/2012 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks