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Defending Mines

sun reflects off grass
     the blades shining silver
         my heart constricts
              you are away, defending mines
the front lawn needs mowing

Referring to today's blog: The Battle for Kumba Hill

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  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:59:00 PM

    No way to keep you away from success, dear Su! Have a nice day!:) Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 10/30/2012 6:33:00 AM

    OOOH GOOD 1, I LOVED IT*SMILES* RON

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 11:51:00 AM

    Su, this one is so familiar to me. Did you post it before? Anyway, I love it. And it's good to see you!

    Crous Avatar Suzette Crous Date: 10/27/2012 1:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, I had posted it earlier on under the working title of "Grass"....It is one of the few tanka which I have written which expresses a "diary clip", hence me posting it here in conjunction with my blog. :-) Love & Peace, my friend. X
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:36:00 AM

    would you please not do this to us, some of us love you heaps here on soup...oh and the poem, awesome........

    Crous Avatar Suzette Crous Date: 10/26/2012 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    OK :-)
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:32:00 AM

    Beautiful Tanka Su.Love this.

    Crous Avatar Suzette Crous Date: 10/26/2012 10:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kash :-)