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Blow

I want to take away your pain and blow it away into the wind.

I want to blow off the dust covering you and make you new again.



For we all get dust on ourselves once in a while, just like a floor gets dirty,

But this time I will sweep up your dust.



That way you will be new in your eyes even though in my eyes you have always been.

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Really good words and beautifully written. - Thank you. Have a pleasant weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Wiliams Avatar Christina Wiliams Date: 10/26/2012 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aww, no thank you for taking the time to read it. I really appreciate it. Have a pleasant weekend also. :)
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 11:01:00 AM

    I really liked how you used the word "blow" here, Christina. Ah, don't we all need somebody like this in our lives. Beautiful message.

    Wiliams Avatar Christina Wiliams Date: 10/26/2012 3:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am really glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to read my poem. :)