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The Loud Cloud

 The Loud Cloud
The cloud is so proud and 
loud this afternoon...
do not mind the coward, 
she will cow very soon.
The twilight cloud has got 
a ploy to paint the moon,
oh watch her drift away as 
the whirlwind croons!

Doubters like fraudsters 
speculates on shadows
dancings to the sweet 
songs of pilgrim sparrows,
you know no rain but you 
cleverly craft a rainbow
while you drown in a 
daylight dream on your 
pillow

Silence to you is not 
suspence but pure pretence
you heart is immersed in 
impregnable impatience.
In the room, you are a rose 
ripped of her radiance
why show up in the field, 
feigning fine fragrance?
(c) October 2012
 Adeleke Adeite
 

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Another weekend is here and I have not read as many poems as I would have liked to this week. I am happy I was able to read yours today. Have a wonderful weekend Adeleke it is great to see you here at the Soup. Hopefully I will be able to read more next week. Love, Carol