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Fallen Angel

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Fallen Angel

                                      Paradise no longer, forever expelled
                                  Between worlds in limbo shamefully held

                                     A span once to carry close to the sky
                                         Burn as I fell, mangled and dry

                             Impossible to compare the beauties I have seen
                                        My Lord, please let me redeem!

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  1. Date: 11/1/2012 4:30:00 PM
    LOVELY PEACE LIKE THE PATTERN XX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:38:00 AM
    What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Erin. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:45:00 PM
    Beautiful poem! Loved it so much. With warmest wishes, Larisa

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 10:59:00 PM
    You are always forgiven Erin, and God sees it as gone. We are the ones who cant let it go. Forgive yourself as well. Carl,