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I wont tell

I won’t tell
What you done to mommy
Please don’t yell
I won’t tell
How she fell
You can trust in me	
I won’t tell
What you done to mommy

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  1. Date: 5/8/2013 12:31:00 PM

    another great write and insight davidscott

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 9:54:00 PM

    You can feel the fear, trying to negotiate a way out. Powerful.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 4:36:00 AM

    The simple words you've used to express such a serious message made it all the more sad. I wonder what will become of the child... and of course the mom. Good work anyhow...

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 8:17:00 AM

    very interesting! I enjoyed reading it

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 8:32:00 PM

    this is a very different and interesting one! it's a very clever way to get across this kind of serious message!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:19:00 AM

    What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Matthew. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX