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Below is the poem entitled Springtime which was written by poet Heather Ober. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Springtime

Thick, grey clouds
subside -
The sun is free,
the sky can breathe
at last.

*Form: Gogyoka


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  1. Date: 4/4/2013 7:17:00 AM
    Here's another I hadn't seen before. I agree with what you said about Dead buffaloes roaming(I was turkey hunting on the plateau in Nebraska when I wrote it)...our worlds are very different, and I love reading about yours. The sky you describe, in so few words, is almost alien to me. Love it!

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 5:51:00 PM
    Heather, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 1:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on yet another well deserved win heather xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:12:00 PM
    Heather I see a rising star here! Congrats on your well deserved first in Joann’s contest!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 10:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Heather. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:20:00 PM
    Congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:10:00 PM
    oops, I was thinking you were someone else when I wrote my comment below. But I now know you too!!

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:09:00 PM
    hey, in a way, yours was like mine!! way to go, girlfriend. BIG congrats.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 4:09:00 PM
    and how did I ever miss this one??

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 10:13:00 PM
    I like it! Very nice, Heather. Best of luck in Joann's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Wouldn't it be nice if it did that here too; Kindest regards for your pretty review. Nice poem.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Very nice... good luck in the contest... Terry

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 11:17:00 PM
    Just wonderful!!!This will do good in the contest.Thanks for visiting and commenting at my poem.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:36:00 PM
    Hi Heathervery good write of spring, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:30:00 PM
    Beautiful piece my dear poet friend... very enjoyed... Michael

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:20:00 PM
    Thank you for your cheery optimistic poem about spring... good luck in Joann's contest! Hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 3:37:00 PM
    LOVLEY WRITE MATE IVE WROTE ABOUT THESE SEAWSONS MYSELF WELCOMNE TO SOUP XX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:54:00 AM
    What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Heather. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:34:00 PM
    Lovely poem Heather, enjoyed, love elizabeth