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Heather Ober
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Springtime
Thick, grey clouds subside - The sun is free, the sky can breathe at last. *Form: Gogyoka
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Caleb Smith
Date: 4/4/2013 7:17:00 AM
Here's another I hadn't seen before. I agree with what you said about Dead buffaloes roaming(I was turkey hunting on the plateau in Nebraska when I wrote it)...our worlds are very different, and I love reading about yours. The sky you describe, in so few words, is almost alien to me. Love it!
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 11/10/2012 5:51:00 PM
Heather, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/9/2012 1:57:00 AM
Congratulations on yet another well deserved win heather xx
craig cornish
Date: 11/8/2012 3:12:00 PM
Heather I see a rising star here! Congrats on your well deserved first in Joann’s contest!
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 11/8/2012 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Heather. Love, Carol
Joann Grisetti
Date: 11/7/2012 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/7/2012 4:10:00 PM
oops, I was thinking you were someone else when I wrote my comment below. But I now know you too!!
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/7/2012 4:09:00 PM
hey, in a way, yours was like mine!! way to go, girlfriend. BIG congrats.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/7/2012 4:09:00 PM
and how did I ever miss this one??
Ruben O.
Date: 11/2/2012 10:13:00 PM
I like it! Very nice, Heather. Best of luck in Joann's Contest! Ruben.
Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 10/29/2012 12:00:00 PM
Wouldn't it be nice if it did that here too; Kindest regards for your pretty review. Nice poem.
Terry O'Leary
Date: 10/28/2012 5:18:00 AM
Very nice... good luck in the contest... Terry
kash poet
Date: 10/27/2012 11:17:00 PM
Just wonderful!!!This will do good in the contest.Thanks for visiting and commenting at my poem.
Owen Yeates
Date: 10/27/2012 2:36:00 PM
Hi Heathervery good write of spring, good luck in the contest, all the best Owen
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 10/27/2012 2:30:00 PM
Beautiful piece my dear poet friend... very enjoyed... Michael
Jack Ellison
Date: 10/26/2012 6:20:00 PM
Thank you for your cheery optimistic poem about spring... good luck in Joann's contest! Hugs, Jack
david scott
Date: 10/26/2012 3:37:00 PM
LOVLEY WRITE MATE IVE WROTE ABOUT THESE SEAWSONS MYSELF WELCOMNE TO SOUP XX DAVIDSCOTT
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/26/2012 6:54:00 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Heather. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX
Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 10/25/2012 5:34:00 PM
Lovely poem Heather, enjoyed, love elizabeth
Gail Angel Doyle
Date: 10/25/2012 5:31:00 PM
Very nice. Winning material. Hugs, Gail
