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She or He
. she or he kicks my hand and I kiss and kiss her or his mom Gogyoka's first attempt
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Sandy Ivy D
Date: 4/28/2013 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Ruben, do you think that poems a stinker. It's only a thought. The humor of brainwashing. I have a feeling that one is perfect. If you don't mind post it for me. It's little. I didn't mean to hurt Linda's feeling or sue's. Haven't heard from them. It's okay. I got a glimpse and read Linda's comment, sayin she was out yesterday. You can post this if you want. It would make me happy in showing off how bad my haiku is. LoL glad it left you speechless. Goodbye for now handsome. S-IVY
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 2/21/2013 1:13:00 PM
Trying to find a poem of yours i didnt read..Couldnt.Rereading your gogyoka..Sweet indeed..Charmaine
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/18/2013 2:42:00 PM
So glad to have a minute to read your work today. I have never tried this form! Thanks for the fav! Light & Love
Vesna Kovrlija
Date: 1/8/2013 1:15:00 AM
Lovely image!
Diogenes Zuniga
Date: 11/27/2012 4:31:00 PM
This reminds me of my yet to be born child(smile). Love the excitement. Very sweet lines though - Dio
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/20/2012 8:21:00 PM
hmmm huh? :P xxxooo how's the family, do you have any type of thing like Thanksgiving down there?
Annalise Brigham
Date: 11/12/2012 9:03:00 PM
Now this is a beautiful picture, Ruben! Delicious!! Thanks for the visit...and the link to Sarah Brightman's music. She's one of my favs along with A. Bocelli!
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/5/2012 11:45:00 PM
Sweet post Ruben...the baby still in the womb i guess in this post and sex unknown.. Maybe they're a he and a she...geee :).Its good to read your poetry again.
Izzy Gumbo
Date: 11/5/2012 4:14:00 PM
nice...
Carrie Richards
Date: 11/4/2012 1:25:00 PM
Ahhhh........I am smiling !!!!
harry horsman
Date: 10/30/2012 10:44:00 AM
awesome first attempt, no revenge here, only love...
James Marshall Goff
Date: 10/28/2012 9:24:00 AM
Another good one
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 10/28/2012 7:10:00 AM
Beautiful piece Ruben... Your like a Political figure kissing babies!!! MJF
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/27/2012 10:37:00 AM
this makes me think you are kissing the mother of a little baby?? What fun!!
Chris D. Aechtner
Date: 10/27/2012 2:33:00 AM
Are you pregnant? I mean, is she pregnant? If so, who is she? Keep kissing her :) A unique and tender gogoyahyahyoka!
Ruben O.
Date: 10/27/2012 2:40:00 AM
Not yet! LOL!
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2012 3:44:00 PM
smacking kiss....love it Ruben. :) // Anne-Lise :)
ilene bauer
Date: 10/26/2012 9:50:00 AM
love it! so tender...
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 10/26/2012 6:53:00 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Ruben. This one made me put my thinking cap on. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX
Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 10/25/2012 5:37:00 PM
Interesting poem, enjoyed, love elizabeth
