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Changing Colors



Colors of beauty that I love to see
From a distance you can look at me
Surrounded by falling leaves at the roadside
Full of happiness in my heart that I want to glide

Trees everywhere changing its colors
Mostly orange, red, and pink that I adore
Each breath of air show us its autumn day
Let celebrate outside by walking happily

Feels the coolness of the clear water at the lake
I sit on the bench and listen to the sound of leaves
A place to stay, I feel like I’m living in a dream world
Even fairies appreciate this breathtaking view to behold

Trees form like a crown at the palace in the East
Bridge look like red carpet as I walk in the forest
Smiling to the great blessing that God gave us
Autumn, a season of mist and mellow fruitfulness



October 26, 2012
PD's Second Change Poem Contest
7th Place Winner



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  1. Date: 2/25/2013 4:29:00 PM

    Hi Maria' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:09:00 PM

    MARIA, thank you for giving me the second chance in viewing this one for my contest...CONGRATULATIONS!!! Always & Forever ;-) LINDA

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:30:00 AM

    Maria, a very beautiful poem you so penned here. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 6:26:00 AM

    Very beautiful write and such pleasant visuals penned here. Absolutely enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Just lovely...I really enjoyed your painting in words. Cynthia

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:45:00 AM

    What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Maria. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 3:04:00 PM

    I really love how you incorporated the words of the contests' title into the ending line of your poem. A lovely fall poem!!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 10/25/2012 11:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    so much thanks friend Andrea for your nice comments :)
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 2:42:00 PM

    love your changing colours, Maria....

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 10/25/2012 11:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much Friend Harry :) Cheers!!