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Once Upon A Car Ride

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Once Upon A Car Ride

Feel like that woman
Screaming, he betrays
They're stealing her
They're taking her
And everything shes kept safe
He Can't protect her
Not strong enough
Not brave enough
Nor man enough
To understand her horror
And how she will remember
The rest of her life

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 2:55:00 PM
    wow Juli, this is powerful, deeply emotional, and needed to be written. remember for all the wrong reasons... the fact that she is the victim, is soon forgotten, in this weird world.. this is the first poem i've read of you. and to my fav you go..

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 5:53:00 AM
    What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Juli-. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX