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Below is the poem entitled Without You which was written by poet Jonathan James. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Without You

Without you, I would only be 
half,
like a ship without a sail on the 
wrong path,
I would be forever in the night, 
without the day,
I would try to speak but have 
nothing to say.

Without you, I wouldn't be 
whole,
I'd be an empty vessel without 
a soul,
I would be in a sky, without a 
star
and search for you in it wide 
and far.

Without you, I wouldn't be 
complete,
I would have a heart all out of 
beat,
I tell you I love you, because I 
do,
I couldn't imagine me, without 
you.

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  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:53:00 PM
    Love can be overpowering! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 2:25:00 PM
    Absolutely charming! Very romantic... and heartfelt, Jonathan! Great verse. Ruben.

    James Avatar Jonathan James
    Date: 10/25/2012 5:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for reading and commenting x
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:30:00 AM
    A nicely rhythmic and sincere poem...I enjoyed reading it today.

    James Avatar Jonathan James
    Date: 10/25/2012 5:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Really pleased you enjoyed this - thank you! X
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 10:57:00 AM
    This is very beautiful it made me smile, I could feel the love in this beautiful poem, love elizabeth

    James Avatar Jonathan James
    Date: 10/25/2012 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm glad you enjoyed this Elizabeth - thanks for reading and commenting!