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Our Journey

We have been on a beautiful journey
One I shall never ever forget
The best journey yet

You were with me all the way
each moment of each day
In my heart you will forever stay

We travelled many roads
Through so many emotions
But love shone through for me and you

God put your hand in mine
In universal love to shine
Through space and time


And though I never understood
I always knew I should
Never give up on love

So here we are today
Back home to stay
With one very important thing to say

I love you all

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 12:30:00 PM

    Dear Elizabeth, Welcome to POETRYSOUP Congratulations on YOUR featured POEM Where YOU on this site before? Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/29/2012 3:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you HG, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 12:07:00 PM

    Your words kindle warmth in my heart and soul. Your artistic pen never seems to fail you. thanks for all your encouragement. Keep the coffee warm... I will visit often....... Jake

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/20/2012 6:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) the coffee is on, see you soon, thank you for your lovely comments, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 5:54:00 AM

    Congrats on your excellent poetry being featured Elizabeth. Love, Carol

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/6/2012 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Carol, have a wonderful evening, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 8:58:00 PM

    This is beautiful and very well written. Thanks for sharing it with us. Also thank you for reading The Night Of The Grizzly. Many blessings. Lucilla

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/3/2012 5:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Lucilla, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 12:21:00 PM

    I love the flow, and grasp of this poem. Elizabeth, your pen is wonderful ,, and love,,,, wow... them words are the best every day... xox~pd

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/2/2012 3:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you pd, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 9:29:00 AM

    NICE WRITE AGAIN MATE DID YOU GERT MY SOUP MAIL THANKS FOR COMMENTS ON MINE XX DAVIDSCOTT

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/2/2012 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you David, I got no soup mail from you
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 7:49:00 AM

    Wonderful tone and simple words brought from true experience! Thanks for reading my poem too, i appreciate it. Justin

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/1/2012 6:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Justin, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/1/2012 7:41:00 AM

    ‡ I Love This Beautiful Poems Title, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth. 'Our Journey.' Many These Winding Roads And Yet Beautiful Love Has Not Foresaken, Rather, Has Paved Beauty's Way. Sweet Your Visit. My Love, Forever, Rachel *

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/1/2012 6:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes this is very true, thank you Rachel, love as ever Elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/31/2012 7:23:00 PM

    Awesome verse! Thanks for stopping by, and keep up the inspiring work! :) Always, Laura

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 11/1/2012 6:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Laura, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/31/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Hey! You got an attitude! - a real fine, loving attitude. More love, daver

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/31/2012 2:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Daver, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/31/2012 5:29:00 AM

    Don't forget to change the form from "I don't know" to Rhyme..Holly

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 5:28:00 AM

    Very beautiful..really keeps the reader's attention...thanks for your comments. Keep writing! xxoo Holly Moore

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/31/2012 7:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Holly, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 8:10:00 PM

    Yo, Elizabeth, wonderful and touching.. BTW--change your form to rhyme and so well done!!

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/31/2012 1:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Craig, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 2:08:00 PM

    And a wonderful journey thru life with plenty of love. A nice uplifting poem you have penned. love phyl

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/31/2012 1:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Phyllis, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/30/2012 8:34:00 AM

    Thats love :o)

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/30/2012 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sure is : ) love elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/29/2012 5:16:00 AM

    when the world is sweet today , an happiness comes out to play, perhaps i'll find me some:) great poetry, yes hon' ... Don of the j...

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/30/2012 4:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Don, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 6:49:00 PM

    ‡ Thank You, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth. A Wonderful Joy, Your Beauty's Priceless Visit. Sweet Dreams. My love, Rachel *

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/29/2012 4:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rachel, sorry I missed your beautiful message last night, hope you had a peacefull night with sweet dreams also, love as ever Elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 5:55:00 PM

    Very nice poem, so sweet:)

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/29/2012 4:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Gwen, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/28/2012 5:44:00 PM

    ‡ I Always Loved Your Beauty, Beautiful Elizabeth. I Saw Your Name Once More Within Neon Lights. Wished To Pass Back By To Say Hello And, Hope You Have A Beautiful Night. Sweet Dreams. My Love, Rachel *

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/29/2012 4:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rachel for your beautiful message, it is always wonderful to see your beautiful words, yes I had peacefull nights sleep thank you, and hope you have a beautiful day, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 6:23:00 PM

    * Melts The Heart Within Such Heart Spoken Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth. Heart's And More Heart's And Love Is The Greatest Beauty Of They All. A Sweet Smelling Aroma. My Love, Rachel *

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/28/2012 4:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rachel, your beautiful words always put a smile on my face, love to you too as always. love elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:16:00 AM

    Wonderful piece my dear Poet friend... hugs n luv Michael

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/27/2012 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Michael, love and hugs to you too.
  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:00:00 AM

    Keep writing keep creating! Light & Love

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/27/2012 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie, I will,I don't have as much time on my hands at the moment, but when i do get a chance I will, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 10:49:00 PM

    Nice write. Everybody on this site welcomes you. We are glad to have you with us.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/27/2012 8:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Robert, lovely to be back with you all, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:04:00 PM

    SO ENJOYED READING YOUR MOST CREATIVE WRITE TONITE ELIZABETH .. FANTASTIC WORK ..THANKXX FOR SWEET COMMENT ON MY HALLOWEEN POEM LUV ..

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/27/2012 8:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda, love elizabeth
    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/27/2012 8:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Anne Lise, hope you have a wonderful weekend also, love elizabeth xox
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 12:34:00 PM

    Hope you will enjoy reading and writing poetry with us. :) Really good poem and beautifully written. - Thank you. Have a enjoyable weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/27/2012 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sorry put your reply on Lindas by mistake, Thank you Anne Lise, hope you have wonderful weekend also, love elizabeth xox
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:54:00 AM

    Welcome back Elizabeth, this is so beautiful... love this............

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/26/2012 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry, hope you are keeping well, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:15:00 AM

    Welcome to PS. A lovely poem to start with, I look forward to reading more of your work.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/26/2012 11:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Joann, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 3:12:00 AM

    We love you too. Wonderful poem about love stored in sweet heart. Expecting more. Loved always, bl

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/26/2012 11:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you bl, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 12:14:00 AM

    Elizabeth, the sentiments in this lovely poem are a heartfelt reminder of how we are all kindred spirits. Love to you too.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/26/2012 11:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Connie, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:34:00 PM

    That's a very lovely heartfelt expressed poem, nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll Date: 10/26/2012 11:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Erich, God bless you too, love elizabeth
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