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gogyoka winter

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gogyoka winter

              Snow lays deep
showing indentations of bird’s feet.
      From whence they come
        Where doest  they go.
         Which way is home.











written 25/10/2012

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:00:00 PM
    Seren, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:45:00 PM
    Ahh!!I like the description of nature..Enjoyed ..Congrats on your win..Sara

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/9/2012 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara
  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win Seren , looking forward to your blog lol xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/9/2012 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy.
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:32:00 PM
    Inventive poem and I love the title you used! congrats in the contest.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/9/2012 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks Andrea
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:27:00 PM
    Seren, Congrats on your well deserved third in Joann’s contest!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/9/2012 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Craig
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Seren. Love, Carol

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/9/2012 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 9:57:00 PM
    This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Seren.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/9/2012 6:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many Thanks
  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:35:00 PM
    congratulations!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/7/2012 5:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    nk you so much, haven't attempted writing like this before.
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:47:00 PM
    awww' Spring is sprung the grass is riz I wonder where the birdies is? They say the bird is on the wing, ain't that absurd, I thought the wing was on the bird' was a fav of mine when little! Light & Love.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:47:00 AM
    Enjoyed your creative work..Sara

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:00:00 AM
    This is so good Seren, such imagery...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 10/25/2012 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh my havent attempted this sort of writing before, more into fun and basic stuff. Thanks for your comments. Seren