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pitch dark small chamber abnormal pulsating mass loving human heart blood regurgitating heart grows weaker with each beat
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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:14:00 PM
    DYNAMIC VISUAL BRINGING CHILLS TO THIS HEART SARA .. SCARY ONE LUV JUST IN MOOD FOR HALLOWEEN TOO ..

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 1:21:00 PM
    The heart growing weaker Sara..) Much to think on again.. I would hope the spirit grows stronger;in you as a counterpoint.."May you be blessed in abundance By the Lord.. Thank you as always for comments..)

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 2:40:00 PM
    Very descriptive, Sara. It will be great fun to see who wins this pivot tanka contest!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:09:00 PM
    A truly unique and remarkable tanka. Love to read you poems.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 7:47:00 AM
    Wow, the power within your lines is truly fascinating and amazing my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous and fully remarkable poem this morning! What an enjoyable and energetic piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 7:06:00 AM
    Enjoyed part Two as well Rick