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Leaves

Leaves

Rains from the other world.
Leaves hugging close
Yellowed ones saw  the wind
Went down singly
to embrace the end.


Form: Gogyoka
25/Oct/12

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  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:00:00 PM

    Jag, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 5:47:00 PM

    Gread idea for the work and wonderful presentation..congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:29:00 PM

    Nice one, Jag!! Glad to finally be seeing it as I go thru the winner's list and congratulations to you.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:24:00 PM

    Congrats on your well deserved third in Joann’s contest!

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 5:00:00 AM

    Congrats on a top win with this lovely Gogyoka, Jag!

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 5:34:00 PM

    Congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:46:00 PM

    Just like a dance! Nice to read something of yours, Jag...been missing my friends' poetry so I stopped by for a while...gwendolen

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:59:00 PM

    Yes the falling leaves are endlessly fasinating! Nice one...Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 10:16:00 AM

    Very expressive work about the fall season..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:45:00 AM

    This is so beautifully written dear friend... kudos! Hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 2:29:00 AM

    Summer days are gone and autumn / winter is here.Beautiful small verse jag. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)