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Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 11:58:00 AM
    One very good poem Jon, it's well written. Have a nice weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/26/2012 3:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne-Lise you have a good weekend too. Also, I did find something on my computer finally that would upload to my avatar. Now if I can only find a pic that will upload.
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 12:09:00 PM
    Sorry for being late reading your excellent poetry Jon. I enjoyed reading it today. I wish I could keep up with all the poets here but I can't. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/25/2012 5:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are right. There are so many poets on the soup. I can't keep up either. Lots of poets and little time.
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:26:00 AM
    Jon, another funny one... but with a philosophical taint... Good work!! Terry

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/25/2012 5:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. William Blake deserves credit for the original. I just embellished it as a parody.
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 7:57:00 AM
    funny and clever and beautifully rhymed! (fix the typo in the first verse, though - i'm sure you meant "tray" and not "try.)

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 10/25/2012 5:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the heads up. My fingers sometimes move faster than my keys or my head.