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Red marks door

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Red marks door

Posture riddled little girl
soul of soot and mind of curl,
standing there alone on brink
entrance, exit in a blink.

There she stands
steal in hands,
thoughts undress,
cool blades press,
time holds still,
gushes spill,
red marks door
her warm pour,
entrance, exit in a blink
no time left for her to think.



(rhyme, something i rarely write...i love my metaphors in free style and it has always been my first choice, but i like to try other forms)

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  1. Date: 10/15/2013 7:48:00 AM

    Loved this, especially the first stanza. Great write; kudos! :)

  1. Date: 10/31/2012 12:27:00 PM

    Desperation haunts the soul when emptiness fills the hole. Tools of the trade can leave their mark. When vision's filled with sky's so dark. She has a friend deep down inside. Where love so true will never hide.