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Tired, Tired, So Dog Gone Tired

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Tired, Tired, So Dog Gone Tired

Tired, so tired, these games, you play,
My heart, ripples to the sound, in flute,
With exhaust ion, till the fingers bleed,
I hyperventilate, trying to catch breath,
But I'm so tired, so dog gone, tired, of,
These inflating promises, that you speak,
In return, it's not how, or why, you prosecute,
Your betray able lies, I don't want to hear them,
I won't listen, just got tired, so I got ear plugs......

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  1. Date: 10/30/2012 11:56:00 AM
    the ones that play music,lol,just kidding,great write Carma

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 10/30/2012 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I will sing to the top of my game lol thanks mi angel xoxox
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:51:00 PM
    Carma, I see you have had enough of this person,, good for you .... always..pd

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 10/26/2012 10:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    YES, I have PD, I will not stand down in cowardliness lol
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 1:05:00 PM
    Hi Sweet love this glad i dropped by, thanks for your comment on my work, all the best Owen

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 10/26/2012 10:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I am pleased that u enjoyed it Owen, and your welcome great stuff of urs
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Sorry for being late reading your excellent poetry Sweet. I enjoyed reading it today. I wish I could keep up with all the poets here but I can't. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 10/26/2012 10:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks always, Carol.... BE ON TIME...LOL!!!!
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:08:00 PM
    The weight of sadness lifted by a touch of humor. Good write.

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed
    Date: 10/26/2012 10:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The weight is heavy, but I will not break....thank you JG!!!!~Hugs~