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Blind Date

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                                  reading the menu
                                  without glasses —
                                  on a blind date




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  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:35:00 PM

    Well at least you won't be able to see how horribly things turn out! Yeah?...haha

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 5:26:00 AM

    Soup mail

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:24:00 AM

    hehe :) Enjoyed. I'm trying to learn to write shorter poems, I'm way too wordy... I always love to come across these little gems. have a great day

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 4:36:00 PM

    LOL......Great blind date with the menu....- Dio

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:10:00 PM

    Ruben,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:23:00 AM

    a few words silenced me deeply felicitations Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 6:04:00 PM

    RUBEN...LOVE YOUR WIN...PD

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:40:00 PM

    hahaha, Love the humor, and congrats, Ruben.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:49:00 PM

    Awesome piece,Ruben...Wonderful presentation..Great work...Congralution

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:13:00 PM

    so provocative LOL..hmmm..did the man take off his glasses 'cause the woman was ugly? was the woman reading without her glasses because she left them home to look pretty?? hmmm xxxOOO Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/8/2012 3:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh oh very hmmmm erous!
  1. Date: 11/8/2012 3:10:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done Ruben - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 11:41:00 AM

    Im smiling...congrats..to funny. BG

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your fine win Ruben, nice.. xx

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 8:28:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 7:22:00 AM

    :) it makes me laugh...i like it..congratulations on your win friend Ruben. cheers!!

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 12:56:00 AM

    funny :)

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:57:00 PM

    This is fun!

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 2:42:00 AM

    Ruben, this is a very crafty senryu. Reading Marlon's comment below reinforces something for me....people ask where my mind sometimes goes lol -- and I ask the same of yours!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:26:00 PM

    Lol....I wouldn't have thought of this. You have an interesting mind! Good one!...I'm going to try and tackle a Haiku next; wish me luck!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:38:00 AM

    Thanks for the morning smile.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:33:00 AM

    knocking me off my socks, ruben... a tickler!..) huggs!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:43:00 AM

    ck email -- Hey look at you with all these good senryu.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:34:00 AM

    okies you are witty..it is funny, correct in tone but no need for the -- [reading the menu without glasses on a blind date] no need to force the badaBOOM less vaudville more satire XXXOOO

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 8:02:00 AM

    ha! hilarious!

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 2:37:00 AM

    A fun gold grains Ruben ..... love it!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :) :) :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:28:00 PM

    I like this, it is a very smart perception, enjoyed your verse, hugs vie

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:04:00 PM

    :) HA! and AHA! Man, I dig this stuff you're doing... I see inspiration finally kicked your arse. I am enjoying what you paint. hugs

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:56:00 PM

    Awesome stuff, friend, enjoyed!! Jag

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 6:14:00 PM

    Ha ha, lol, this is a good one Ruben, I really enjoyed reading this awesome write this evening! What a fabulous poem my friend, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:58:00 PM

    You are terrific at these short, witty senryu. Just add two lines to get the gogyohka. You can do this. And then enter my contest.