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Blessing Star

Your black hair shimmered
I knew not the reason
I watched it every little season
My heart and head simmered
Your shapely body twinkled
As if never would it be wrinkled
Yet it had a little lesion
Which never ever rankled


You were my heart`s queen
Those organs of sight
Just witty and bright
They caught me off guard
An angel is all l had seen
I zoomed heavenward!

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  1. Date: 4/19/2013 10:40:00 AM

    Looking up for your star.Beautiful.

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Hi; This is the first time that I visit.Congratulations on this being featured. Great poem and you zoomed in the right direction.......Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 3:47:00 PM

    and congrats on this one having been featured. I see you came here not a year ago!!

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 3/31/2013 4:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea, yes...from that point it was something like a meteoric rise . This is simply courtesy to the great support rendered by this community.
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 3:46:00 PM

    well, you had no new poetry but I went back to your first post ever and found this sweet symbolic one. I love how you zoomed heavenward for your beautiful star!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:19:00 PM

    Ndaba, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 11/12/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Poet Destroyer. Thank you!
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 6:17:00 AM

    Congratulations on your awesome poetry being featured this week Ndaba. Love, Carol

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 11/6/2012 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Carol!