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  1. Date: 10/17/2013 6:50:00 AM
    morning, I laughed to see that one up there.... I was wondering if you favorite the poem at all. lol. it is cool. others understood the poem. hugs . Linda

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 5:38:00 AM
    I take pride in writing. I might have some sloppy poems. cause I am an out of the hood poet. but, even my bad poems are good to others. Do you remember my grandpa poem. that poem was, suppose to be my worst poem. a show off that I can post bad poems. ... and guess what .. I was very shocked when Poets hassled the poem. they fell in love with the poem. it brought a tear to their eye.

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 5:32:00 AM
    read his latest, and nod your head side to side. Them trying to knock me out of the number one spot.

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:29:00 AM
    You have to admit the connection

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:32:00 PM
    Just in case Scribe, I'm stopping by with my warmest thoughts my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:51:00 AM
    great wrte marlon.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:08:00 AM
    this has been a thought that has always bothered me and after thinking about it my conclusion is,Father,Mother and Child,this fulfills life cycle,hope you agree,great write Scribe

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:04:00 PM
    It's best to never question the Lord. The answer will be,when the time comes... Very Inquisitive write indeed.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:28:00 AM
    Enjoyed..Scribe! Jim

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:22:00 PM
    Great piece to ponder questions we will never answer while on earth. Time shall tell my poet brother. Michael

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:03:00 PM
    I believe because I have been given reasons to thruout life. When God truly reaches out to you and saves your life from example my car wreck you would feel the same as me. I do not intend by commenting like I did any sort of bad for you. I just thought I would tell you what I knew about the questions you asked.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 11:07:00 AM
    Indeed this is a Verse Drama. The questions have no answers. An excellent write. Also thanks for your very kind comments on my poem Time's Termite. I am gratefull. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:20:00 AM
    I have to be honest with you. An angel appeared before Mary and told her to not be afraid you will bare a son and His name will be called Jesus. God found her highly favored. Times were different then, if you carried a child without marriage you were stoned to death. God became flesh. Jesus said I and the father are one. God loves people, He just doesn't love sin and that is why Jesus died for sin and said "it is finished- sin."

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:12:00 AM
    Hi Marlon, this wonderful poem, asks the question, also gets my immagination going, as most of your poems do...i feel if on the right track, that woman has always had a raw deal, on this planet,,, mainly driven by men orientated religion...

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:10:00 PM
    what scripture are you referring to Scribe

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:15:00 AM
    I agree Scibe, the Mother of Humankind has been egregiously repudiated - hopefully She is content being addressed as the Holy Spirit - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:17:00 PM
    This is something to think about. I myself don't believe in submissive- ness. I think in the other life we will find out. Have a good night. Don't sleep on it. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:13:00 PM
    an interesting poem. who not mother/spirit/daughter?