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INQUISITIVE

              

               Father
 


    Spirit                      Son

A son without a mother?
Did a Wo-it( Goddess) bare this child?
She never appears in the word!
Makes you wonder if the Wo-it, would've been tampering with judgement, altering the course of mankind!
Or is she housed under a roof of submissive-ness?....

If celibacy, is the practice of Gods, then who beget It(God)?

By The Scribe


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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:32:00 PM

    Just in case Scribe, I'm stopping by with my warmest thoughts my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:51:00 AM

    great wrte marlon.

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:08:00 AM

    this has been a thought that has always bothered me and after thinking about it my conclusion is,Father,Mother and Child,this fulfills life cycle,hope you agree,great write Scribe

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:04:00 PM

    It's best to never question the Lord. The answer will be,when the time comes... Very Inquisitive write indeed.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 9:28:00 AM

    Enjoyed..Scribe! Jim

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:22:00 PM

    Great piece to ponder questions we will never answer while on earth. Time shall tell my poet brother. Michael

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:03:00 PM

    I believe because I have been given reasons to thruout life. When God truly reaches out to you and saves your life from example my car wreck you would feel the same as me. I do not intend by commenting like I did any sort of bad for you. I just thought I would tell you what I knew about the questions you asked.

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 11:07:00 AM

    Indeed this is a Verse Drama. The questions have no answers. An excellent write. Also thanks for your very kind comments on my poem Time's Termite. I am gratefull. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 8:20:00 AM

    I have to be honest with you. An angel appeared before Mary and told her to not be afraid you will bare a son and His name will be called Jesus. God found her highly favored. Times were different then, if you carried a child without marriage you were stoned to death. God became flesh. Jesus said I and the father are one. God loves people, He just doesn't love sin and that is why Jesus died for sin and said "it is finished- sin."

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 5:12:00 AM

    Hi Marlon, this wonderful poem, asks the question, also gets my immagination going, as most of your poems do...i feel if on the right track, that woman has always had a raw deal, on this planet,,, mainly driven by men orientated religion...

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:10:00 PM

    what scripture are you referring to Scribe

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 11:15:00 AM

    I agree Scibe, the Mother of Humankind has been egregiously repudiated - hopefully She is content being addressed as the Holy Spirit - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 9:17:00 PM

    This is something to think about. I myself don't believe in submissive- ness. I think in the other life we will find out. Have a good night. Don't sleep on it. Lucilla

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:27:00 PM

    I like this Scribe, very interesting for sure. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:13:00 PM

    an interesting poem. who not mother/spirit/daughter?