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A David for David

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A David for David

David is small teenage boy from Israel
A son of Jesse whose king named Saul

He carried a slingshot on his side for protection
Used it for work with a matching pouch of stones

There’s a war between Israel and Philistine
Takes forty days for them to initiate how to begin

David knew about the giant called Goliath
Not afraid to fight him without any mask

He only carried with him his faith to defeat 
The mighty giant whom every man is afraid

One day David saw Goliath at the battlefield
Ready to fight, so he closed his eyes and prayed

The giant move forward for a great kill
David reached his bag and used his skills

The stone hit the giant straight in the forehead
He fell face down on the ground and really beg

David took Goliath sword, killed him and cut his head
He did it finally and triumphantly makes the giant dead






I compare this story of faith and bravery to our dear David the poet
With his powerful poems makes us inspired even if we didn't meet yet

Enjoy your long vacation together with your beautiful wife
I know you are happy sharing unforgettable moments in life


October 24, 2012
By: Maria Paz
For Cyndi's "A David For David" Contest
1st Place Winner

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Marie. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:49:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Mary! This is indeed a great dedication poem! Thank you so much for all your congratulatory remarks and nice comments on my work. I am late on the soup today because I played piano. I'm on my way to your poems. love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Maria, well done xx

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 3:57:00 PM
    Maria. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD

  1. Date: 10/29/2012 3:11:00 PM
    both a beautiful poem, and wonderful dedication....

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 5:06:00 AM
    This is a GREAT Write my friend! I love this Bible story when I was still a child. I'm sure David the great poet here will love it much too! Good luck always! love, Leonora

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poetry Maria. I enjoyed reading it and wish you all the best in your writing always. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:13:00 AM
    So clever choice Maria, good luck in the contest. - Have a nice day. - / / oxox love from Anne-Lise :)