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STILL ALIVE

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Below is the poem entitled STILL ALIVE which was written by poet Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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STILL ALIVE

STILL ALIVE
Screaming, my contorted face
Buried in this hard ground
By a naughty Nate, wickedly unsound
Natural beauty in my cold palace
I'M COMING BACK FOR MY REVENGE

*This Poem is a Nate Special for PoetrySoup
  as a response to his poem "Alive"

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  1. Date: 10/23/2013 1:28:00 PM

    Very cool piece; enjoyed it very much, V. Kudos! :)

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 11:54:00 PM

    Hello Hanitra..Its so easy to get inspired by other poets.Enjoyed reading your revenge response:).Hope you give us more to read.Have a blessed and Happy New Year.

    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop Date: 1/2/2013 11:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    and thanks for stopping to read my post...
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:17:00 PM

    Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday , Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:42:00 AM

    It is always comforting to read the title of your first poem on this page Hanitra. I do however look forward to reading more from you. I know you have lots within you waiting to escape onto a page. I hope this note finds you well. Your Canadian Friend Rick

    Rabary-Andriamanday Avatar Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday Date: 11/11/2012 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, Rick! Nice to have someone to remind me of the Holy Duties of The Poet...But sometimes, it seems, everyday life must have its own way and tries to attract you far, far away from all the important things that make your life worth living! Anyway, here I am.. for the time being!:) Blessings, Hanitra
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 5:44:00 PM

    Hello Hanitra Just a note to say hello, looking forward to you putting more of your poetry on line.

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 8:46:00 PM

    I see you got your Boo on. I dont't want to get you mad. Fun poem.

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 4:04:00 PM

    wow scary, interesting is this

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:06:00 AM

    Just lay down and let it go. Just look in the mirror, it's telling you no. That hate for Nate will kill your spirit. Cause when you scream, no one will hear it. Tis the season for no reason, this hallowed out old cave. For revenge is only treason for what we should not crave. Have a lovely day Voahan. :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 7:56:00 AM

    Interesting..I thought that I remembered something similar..I thought well I must have read this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..What country are you from?Very long name..

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:19:00 AM

    Not quite sure what to say about this...guess I'd have to read the other poem first. I often get inspired by other writers also....Have a blessed day !!