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Written by: Ruben O.

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A New Wrinkle II

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                                 the razor shaves
                                 a new wrinkle
                                 that bleeds




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Joann Grisetti Date: 12/11/2012 11:27:00 AM i am bleeding with you on this one. love it.
Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/18/2012 11:38:00 PM Ouch those bleeding years... Now this is powerful Mr.O
Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/18/2012 11:38:00 PM DESERVES A FAVOURITE..I wish i could get inspired again to write so profound.. great post RUBEN
Carrie Richards Date: 11/4/2012 1:24:00 PM As if wrinkles weren't painful enough...ouch!!
kathryn collins Date: 10/26/2012 8:42:00 AM stings in more ways than one.
Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/24/2012 4:23:00 PM wrinkles on your chin?? Hmmm, must be the mustache area! I can imagine you shaving a mustache, Ruben! this was enjoyable to read.
Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/24/2012 5:58:00 AM I like this one better more meat/meet to it! [remnants of laughter/play hide in seek with my mood/tattle-tales] thank you Mr. O..my muse of the day! Light & Love
SCRIBE ML Date: 10/23/2012 10:09:00 PM I thought it was a blessing to wrinkle and grey. I stay away from mirrors nowadays; it hasn't told me I'm the fairest one in awhile! Good write.
CYNDI MACMILLAN Date: 10/23/2012 8:23:00 PM AH! Me LIKE! Sounds like my hubby's cleft in his chin. Gets him everytime. You nailed the image.