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A New Wrinkle II

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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 11:27:00 AM

    i am bleeding with you on this one. love it.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:38:00 PM

    Ouch those bleeding years... Now this is powerful Mr.O

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:38:00 PM

    DESERVES A FAVOURITE..I wish i could get inspired again to write so profound.. great post RUBEN

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:24:00 PM

    As if wrinkles weren't painful enough...ouch!!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 8:42:00 AM

    stings in more ways than one.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 4:23:00 PM

    wrinkles on your chin?? Hmmm, must be the mustache area! I can imagine you shaving a mustache, Ruben! this was enjoyable to read.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:58:00 AM

    I like this one better more meat/meet to it! [remnants of laughter/play hide in seek with my mood/tattle-tales] thank you Mr. O..my muse of the day! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 10:09:00 PM

    I thought it was a blessing to wrinkle and grey. I stay away from mirrors nowadays; it hasn't told me I'm the fairest one in awhile! Good write.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:23:00 PM

    AH! Me LIKE! Sounds like my hubby's cleft in his chin. Gets him everytime. You nailed the image.