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She Sipped

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She Sipped

He shook glass
Screamed silence
Ran the walls
She sipped

He slammed his hands
Despised his frustration
Feared his need
She sipped

He called to her
Begged of her
Held out in hope for her
She sipped

He broke apart
Came undone
Was no more
She sipped

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  1. Date: 11/2/2012 1:15:00 PM

    Nicely done! The contrast between the anguish and the feeling of indifference is brought out very well.

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 11:24:00 AM

    Welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - You write very well - I like this poem. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:30:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Dee. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 3:28:00 PM

    Beautiful poem. Very well written. :)