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On this October Day

I sit in my garden gazing at the trees.
Leaves of gold, red, amber and orange fills the sky.
Some spinning downward, falling multidirectional.
A warm glow carpets the still green grass of fall.

The tree trunks look so much darker
Against the intense vibrant colored leaves. 
The backlight of sun rays illuminates them,
Giving them an almost translucency.
It reminds me of stained glass against sky blue.
It seems like an energy is infused within these leaves,
Setting them afire on this October day.
A wondrous contentment it brings me.
Nature is certainly at her healing best today.


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  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:25:00 AM

    Wonderfully descriptive--full of color--but I'm glad it's not October now!! LOL Congrats again Connie

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Big congrats, Connie! I remember this one from before. Autumn is my favourite season and you have done it total justice here. "Stained glass against sky blue" - Sigh. Wonderful!

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/25/2013 12:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Heather thanks for your wonderful comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:49:00 AM

    Very beautiful poem Connie...congratulations..Donna.

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/24/2013 5:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Donna for the congrats. Much appreciated my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 3/24/2013 3:39:00 AM

    Connie, beautifully written poem. Congrats on your win. Rick

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/24/2013 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Rick thanks for your congrats. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:19:00 PM

    Connie, :-) Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/24/2013 7:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your contest inspires our muse to create. Thanks for having them. When I recover from my second surgery on Tuesday, I hope to have a contest of my own. Warm Smiles Always, Connie
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 12:08:00 PM

    nice write you have here. these words paint the picture well of the signs of autumn - JH

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 3/24/2013 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you JH for your delightful comment. I used to be a painter, canvas painting I did do. This is what I would have painted if I had taken out a brush instead of a quill. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:48:00 AM

    So many fine writes generated by nature! Light & Love

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 12/9/2012 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Debbie for you comment. Nature has music for those who listen- close your eyes, open your heart and listen with your soul, then open you eyes. Some people do not really use their ears to hear and their eyes to see. Warm smiles always, Connie
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 7:50:00 AM

    ‡ Welcome, Sweet Beautiful Connie, Unto My Own Fragrant Perfumed In Beauty's, Garden Of Favourite Poets. ‡

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 11/19/2012 5:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rachel. Happy Holiday, Connie
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 7:44:00 AM

    ‡ Vibrant These Vivid Colours, Sweet Beautiful Connie. Perhaps A Metaphor Brushed These Splendours As Pirouetting Ballerinas In All Of Their Beautiful Hues; Swirling And Twirling Laughing And Reaching Their Hands High, Their Love, Unto The Bluest In Joyful Skies. Most Surely A Place And Garden A Heart Would Wish To Be; Magical. Thank You, For Your Kind As Wonderful Visit; Autumn's Splendours. Happy Holidays. My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 11/19/2012 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for you poetically penned comment and to you a Happy Holiday, Connie
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:10:00 AM

    So wonderfully descriptive! Your eyes see the world so vividly...like I once did when I was young and taking everything into my inquisitive existence. You take me back to those wonderful days...

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 11/13/2012 6:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Light has the power to turn anything it touches-metal, glass, water, landscapes-into a masterpiece. The play of light and shadows are all around you Frank. Really observe your surroundings and you can capture moods from whimsical, magical to the dramatic. Age has nothing to do with observation and perception does. You can still have those wonderful days... I look forward to your next write. Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 11/6/2012 2:59:00 PM

    Very descriptive winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 11/6/2012 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your comment Sara. I wanted to describe in words instead of with paints and brushes on a canvas to create this vibrant October day in a poem form for Poetry Soup and its members.
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Connie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 7:47:00 AM

    This is a beautiful verse.Congratulations on your win,Connie

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 3:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Connie xx

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 9:57:00 PM

    full of tranquility!! Congrats on your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:49:00 PM

    Beautifully done, Connie. I would have rated it much higher. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/2/2012 6:17:00 PM

    Such beautiful words to so aptly describe this beautiful season

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 11/3/2012 4:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne. This is my favorite season. It's much too short.
  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:43:00 AM

    Crisp and intense Connie. Makes me want to jump into a big pile of red and gold. love, Kathy p.s. Welcome

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 11/3/2012 4:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. Yes, bring your inner-child out and play away Kathryn. Warm hugs, Constance
  1. Date: 10/25/2012 9:16:00 PM

    Welcome to the soup. Thanks for sharing your tranquil thoughts of fall with us

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 7:11:00 PM

    As Heather said... you've captured Autumn perfectly! However, today here in Canada, the temperature reached 75 degrees. A last gasp I imagine! A nice write... welcome to the SOUP! Hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 1:20:00 PM

    You've captured Autumn perfectly here. I especially love the stained glass imagery. Very nice write! :)

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 2:52:00 PM

    Hello ... Connie, you write very well! Welcome you to the P-Soup, hope you will have the great pleasure of sharing your poem here. - Having fun with poem. :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 10/24/2012 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ann for your very nice comment. I enjoy writing poems.
  1. Date: 10/24/2012 5:31:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Connie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    Gildersleeve Avatar Connie Gildersleeve Date: 10/24/2012 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I look forward to readying other poetry from other poets here.