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seeking You

Every breath's an 
opportunity
A chance to start anew
I am my own worst 
enemy
You say, to take all the 
blame from You

No sooner have I passed 
a test
Than another one 
commences
How am I supposed to do 
my best
When lack of Your favor 
dulls my senses?

I toil and struggle to 
make my way
The effort is tiring my 
bones
The more I stay clear of 
jealousy
The more I'm assaulted 
with stones

Where are You in your 
kingdom
Am I worthy of an 
audience..?
Let You, the saints and 
angels decide
What's the sum of my 
experience

No one I turn to knows 
Your name
They know not how I 
tremble
You send me clues, 
visions and texts
That my tired mind must 
assemble

Judgment awaits all 
mankind
The day is drawing near
'Till then I fill my empty 
days
In utter loneliness and 
fear.

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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 2:08:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry today Vanessa. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:53:00 AM

    Thanks so much for reading my poetry :)

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:36:00 AM

    go,live it up a little,don't be scared,consumed by loneliness and fear,nice write Vanessa

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:22:00 AM

    well written poetry, and welcome to the soup!