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The Doll

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The Doll

10-21-12

Like Sally I sense tragedy’s at hand For this heart can only sew so much Until all string is used to the last strand Hanging dolls staring at my lonesome self I wish I was more than what they see If only they’d welcome me on their shelf My porcelain skin would win over all Inanimate beings look alive at my face As I let my angriest plastic tear fall I can’t be SxTxIxTxCxHxExD this time. . . I can’t be displayed. . . I can’t remove the grime I’ve become the doll And we all sense the worst A happy ending for them all And when they finally welcome me to their shelf It is empty and caked with dust Leaving me staring. . . at MxYxSxExLxF Like Sally I sensed tragedy at hand But unlike her, that’s how I stay I stay. I stay. I stay. SxTxOxP. . . IxT IxS SxTxAxRxIxNxG AxGxAxIxN. . . SxHxE WxOxNxT LxExT MxE SxLxExExP SxHxE HxAxTxExS MxE. . .

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  1. Date: 10/26/2012 9:08:00 PM
    I love the ending there... Is she still staring at you? Hee,hee...

  1. Date: 10/24/2012 3:31:00 PM
    * LOL. She just needs a warm place to get out of the rain baby girl. She'll be alright, just give her a sweet caress and soft kiss every now and again, ok ~ My love, Rachel *

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 10/24/2012 5:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    . . . oh... kay? :)
    St.Cross Avatar Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 10/24/2012 3:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    .................Anyway, hold her close and trat her good baby girl. *