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my dog ate my essay

My doggy ate my essay,
he picked up all my mail.
He cleaned my dirty closet
and dusted with his tail.

He straightened out my posters
and swept my wooden floor.
My parents almost fainted when
he fixed my bedroom door.

I did not try to stop him.
He made my windows shine.
My room looked like a palace.
My jackets smelled like pine.

He fluffed up every pillow.
He folded all my clothes.
He even cleaned my fish tank with
a toothbrush and a hose.

I thought it was amazing
to see him use a broom.
I’m glad he ate my essay
on “How to Clean My Room”.

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  1. Date: 10/24/2012 10:31:00 AM

    Nice easy flow you have there son. You wouldn't by any chance let me borrow this dog you have would you?

    JACKS Avatar ELI JACKS Date: 10/28/2012 7:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ok bud commin
  1. Date: 10/23/2012 11:10:00 PM

    That was easy reading.........with a message. I enjoyed reading it.