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AUTUMNAL CHARM

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AUTUMNAL CHARM




chill arrives
twirling like white spine,
with each puff
stringed leaves coil
on embroidered trellises--
trimmed by russet tips

while moon hides,
gale spills fragrant mint
and bright dew,
touching skin
of buds charmed ,as autumn wind
encircles a dance

through waft's chimes
petals tip ballet
down wet lanes,
flaunting  hues
dyed in fall’s velvet doilies--
casting season's spell!


* new form:shadorma---3-5-3-3-7-5

For Russel Sivey's Up the Autumn Air
by nette onclaud
22 oct 12


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  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win> :-)

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 8:07:00 AM
    Beautiful lines. Congrats on a well-deserved win!

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 7:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 1:16:00 AM
    it feels just wonderful to read this poem congrats on your in this contest.....spandan

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 12:59:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Great creativity..Sara

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 12:29:00 PM
    microscopical autumnal charm. impressive many congrats. Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 3:27:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Nette xx

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:20:00 AM
    lovely shadorma Nette, always a pleasure reading your work. congrats!

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:42:00 PM
    congratulations on your grand win Nette. Its a beautiful poem. cheers!!

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 9:36:00 PM
    charm is a very good word to be in the title of this enchanting poem, nette. Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 9:11:00 PM
    CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON A GRANDIOSE WRITE AND WIN .. WOW SHARING IS SO FUN AT NUMBER ONE ..

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 8:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning poem.

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 7:02:00 PM
    Lovely form and words. congratulations on yur win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:59:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/25/2012 3:50:00 AM
    Wonderful poem on Autumn!I can just visualise the scene!!Amazing!

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:26:00 PM
    Outstanding piece my dear Nette. Love it!! Hugs n luv Michael

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 1:55:00 PM
    WORDS CHARM NOT ONLY AUTUMN BUT ME AS WELL NETTE LUV .. THIS WRITE IS DIVINE AND KNOW IT WILL PLACE HIGH AT JUDGING .. ALWAYS AMAZING YOUR PRESENTATIONS LUV ..

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 9:14:00 AM
    sheer poetic grace, nette, i just love reading your poems, they are enchanting...

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 8:12:00 AM
    great write, nette, really lovely!! Jag

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 5:54:00 PM
    a lovely poem that truly captures this amazing season!

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