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Garden of peace

In this dark garden of peace
In front of me you lay
in this cubic box of stone
and on it it had your name

i prayed to god
that you would go to heaven
and i walked out...
of this garden of peace

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  1. Date: 12/1/2012 9:49:00 PM

    AWE! I am sad. Even though you made me sad, it is an excellent piece. Keep writing so I can keep reading. Thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 5:41:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Habzy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol