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Icing

my love;
last night
while you drifted
curled within my arms
my thoughts grew
full-bloom, beneath the moon.

on white sand
we melted together
into passion's splash
like dripping candles
atop birthday cake

and i wished
you awake!




10/21/2012...my birthday :)

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  1. Date: 10/23/2012 4:18:00 PM

    First Happy Birthday. (Sorry a few days late) 2nd you write from places that only true poets reach. So proud to read your work. Hugs and a kiss on the cheek Michael

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 10/23/2012 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you :) Your comments are always so sweet! hugs
  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:23:00 PM

    There is something desperate in this emotional poem of wonderful images and sensual sentiments Sandra - J.A.B. %

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams Date: 10/23/2012 5:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Justin!