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Love Ends

Torn apart; life now
seems strangely open
as my heart weeps.
Broken down castle walls
usurped by your emotional
crusades.
Crumbled defences.
Retreat.
Then see the open plain 
behind you.
A new path, a life
promised for you.
From simmering embers
a phoenix flames.

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  1. Date: 4/16/2013 10:56:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Zac.Love Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 10:55:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Zac.Love Terry xoxo

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 10:29:00 AM

    Nice job!! Very nicely written :)

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 9:17:00 AM

    What a wonderful poem Zac. Love ending and a new life beginning. I love the poems of love and loss.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 3:04:00 AM

    Love continues with new path, lovely done. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 8:58:00 PM

    I wrote volumes on love, this speaks volumes in just a few words. Maybe we are cursed...but resilient.

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 12:24:00 PM

    A very intresant poem Zac, well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)