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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:19:00 AM
    Gripping poem David! It parallels the reality of dependance and in a huge scale mirrors what is happening in the world especially where women and children are concerned in relation to their role in society. Well penned!

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 2:23:00 AM
    I felt awwwwww when i read this. sad sad tale......Seren

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:56:00 PM
    the picture sorely paint you do, of how it is when life has flew, poor ole dummies loss:(

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:14:00 AM
    This has great imagery...I can see it as it happens. Well done!....Thanks for all your help..Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 12:07:00 AM
    the dummy speaks, hisvoice is weak, good bye old friend of mine.. great poem mate...

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 6:20:00 PM
    oh MY I had not seen this before. I really like this one, it's one of your best and deserves a big FAVE.

  1. Date: 11/7/2012 12:06:00 PM
    Hi David, just me checking in on you. Hope you are doing okay. Love to you and your wife *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 1:10:00 PM
    Hi david even though you are away I still trawl through your back catalogue this is a gem, hope you and your good lady are ok, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 3:22:00 PM
    I always knew they had a life of their own. As a child I believed it for sure and this great story makes me think you did too! :)

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 11:20:00 AM
    Great imagery, enjoyed the feel of this piece.

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 10:39:00 PM
    A very well said ventriloquist write here David I enjoyed, this piece.....

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 2:29:00 PM
    this is so good, David, it really takes the reader on a journey... and what an ending.. brilliant... stay well, and love to your wife....

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 12:52:00 PM
    David, this man looks scary... I like the free-verse work you have here. Your ending says it all... enjoyed...Tex

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 12:34:00 PM
    This is so insightful, David..and is a picture of reality..keeping God in a cupboard; reaching out only when we need him, etc. So cleverly composed and well written! Will be adding this to my favs. list. Annalise

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 11:36:00 AM
    This is a fascinating write, a glorious poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this harmonious piece, full of life, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 9:03:00 AM
    Dear David, The last three lines dropped my jaw. I guess it was letting go. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 10/21/2012 8:49:00 AM
    The ending gave me a chill...a shiver. Enjoyed reading your unique poem...so sad though.